I’m participating in the “Fiction In A Flash Challenge” Week #11 NEW Image Prompt by Suzanne Burke. I played around with different types of poetry last week. Here’s the Haibun Poem I came up with for this image:
The river roars over the precipice. Its cry is heard for miles as it travels its painful path down the jagged granite. The clear sapphire essence turns cloudy and white. There is nothing to cling to as it’s thrust into the unknown.
The great fall of tears
Rapidly release the pain
In the pool’s peace.
Embrace your inner child, D. L. Finn
Good one, Denise.
Thank you, John. I had fun trying some new poetry formats.
Looked fun.
Lovely, Denise, and so relevant to the current state of affairs. ♥
Thank you, Gwen. I was thinking about our current year as I wrote it.
I can hear its power in your words and the image. Lovely.
Thank you, Jacqui:) I’m glad you could hear it.
Thanks for this thoughtful Haiban, Denise! It’s a great contribution. I look forward to featuring it on my site on Friday, August 7th. 😊
Thanks, Soooz. I had fun attmepting something new for the challenge. Plus it always helps you pick great pictures:)
I love choosing the images! It really time consuming but I enjoy it immensely.
The pain is gone, rest at last! I like this poem a lot,Denise!
Thank you Miriam! Yes, rest at last:)
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You’re welcome, Denise!
Beautiful, Denise! You captured the essence of something powerful and divine in those few words!
Thank you, Jan. I was feeling those words that day.
Wow! Very dramatic, Denise. Your words held me spellbound!
Thank you, Mae:) I’m glad my first attempt was well recieved!
Lovley, Denise 🙂
Thank you, Harmony:)
Very nice, Denise!
Thanks, Joan 🙂
Tears are cathartic Denise. Well-done!
They are, Balroop. Thank you 🙂
What an exquisite response to the prompt, Denise. Hugs on the wing.
Thank you, Teagan:) Hugs on the wing back.