‘Fiction In A Flash Challenge’ Week #17 @pursoot #IARTG #ASMSG #WritingCommunity #poetry #haibun

Here’s my take on Suzanne Burke’s ‘Fiction In A Flash Challenge Week #17 NEW Image Prompt. This picture took me all over the place, including a short story and different types of poetry. This Haibun Poem is the one that called to me today.

THE MESSAGE

The fog penetrated my skin, adding heaviness to my existence. The furious waves crashing against the shore fueled my anger. The salty air was bitter in my lungs, making each breath a battle. Alone, I pushed through the frigid sands, going nowhere, until I couldn’t take another step. I sat down on a flat rock and waited for the pain to end. This went on ceaselessly until I caught a glimmer in the haze. A bottle had washed ashore at my feet.

Foggy depression

A healing message offered

Remember, you’re loved.

30 thoughts on “‘Fiction In A Flash Challenge’ Week #17 @pursoot #IARTG #ASMSG #WritingCommunity #poetry #haibun”

  1. Thanks so much for this moving and thoughtful Haibun, Denise. I’m about to feature it on the Challenge site. Thanks again for joining in. 😊

      1. Thank you for giving us the opportunity to read what you come up with. You’ve contributed some awesome work, my friend. Hugs right back atcha. 🤗

    1. Thank you, Jessica! I’m always looking for those messages and I agree it is uplifting. We all need that now. xo

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