#TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 212 #SYNONYMSONLY #etheree #poems #ethereepoem @ColleenChesebro

Here’s Colleen Chesebro’s Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge No. 212 “Synonyms only” from these two words: Tight & Loose

This is my first attempt at a Etheree Poem 1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9/10

HOPE

Light

flowed down

through darkness

Touching my soul

Awakening hope

That had been constricted

Under a mountain of fear

Sparkling blue wings unfettered

Ready to return from where I came

I soared through the stars into love’s embrace.

42 thoughts on “#TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 212 #SYNONYMSONLY #etheree #poems #ethereepoem @ColleenChesebro”

    1. Thanks, Eden. This one was a challenge to get the syablles count right, but it worked out.

  1. Beautiful, Denise. I love how you structured this poem. I’ve never tried writing an Etheree poem, but I just might one of these day. Thank you for the inspiration and the soaring into love’s embrace. 💗

    1. Thanks, Gwen. I was going to write and then work on the syllable count, but decided to do it in the counter as I went. That really helped me. xo

    1. It was, Staci:) Having to use those words was the most challenging part of it. Thank you, I am enjoying learning how to do this. xo

    1. Thank you, Sandra. I did get some good editing done and working my way through the stories. Hope you did too. You have a great evening as well. xo

    1. Thank you, Sally:) It was fun to work with and has more options if the muse leads me in that direction. hugs xo

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