From Finn’s Forest #13! #writingcommunity #authors #books #editing #newstory #newsletter

Hi!

I’m enjoying spring and with all the new life decorating my landscape, although I hope the rains continue into June, so I don’t have to worry about fires yet.

These last several weeks I’ve been in the editing zone with Sounds in the Silence. I spent a good week pouring through my current work in progress, looking for filler words. Each book is unique, so it keeps me on my toes. What I found were a lot of unnecessary thens, nods, and ups. Other times, it was very or definitely. Once I pay attention to a word, a new one sneaks in.

I am very thankful for that find feature in Words, especially when you have to go through 600 ups. Yes, I cut a good chunk of them.

It was nice to take a break from working on the story, although what I found was some of the weaker spots were in the same place as these filler words. Next, I will focus on the total flow of story and conversation tags. That last one is my least favorite. How many times can one character shrug, nod, or grin?

Sounds in the Silence was written during NaNoWri—a dual timeline with no plan ready. I just jumped in. I’m paying for that during editing, despite that, a story did bloom that I hope to release this June.

I have been offering excerpts of Sounds in the Silence in my newsletter. Interested? You can sign up to receive my once-a-month letter here on my website if you aren’t already subscribed.

This is also where you will run across my Book of the Month. I started the Book of the Month in September of 2021. The very first book on the list was: Ghostly Interference by Jan Sikes

Here’s the link to my lastest newsletter:  March Newsletter. 

The current Book of Month: Tell me a story: in 99 words
By Annette Rochelle Aben

I only mention this because it’s a great list of books by amazing authors. If you ever find yourself wondering what to read, you might just find your next read here.

Next week, I’ll be sharing my book reviews.

Embrace that inner child by reading a good book! D. L. Finn

New Release! “Finding Me” by Jacquie Biggar @JacqBiggar #newrelease #familydrama #YA #family #sisters #writingcommunity #whattoread #readersoftwitter

I’m so excited to have Jacquie Biggar here today to celebrate her latest, “Finding Me.” I have been eager to continue The Defiant Sister Duet Series! I am reading it right now, and it is every bit as enthralling as the first book. Review to follow 🙂

Thank you for sharing my new release on your blog today, Denise. It’s deeply appreciated!

A few years ago, a regular customer of my restaurant lost her husband to suicide. It shocked our small community and devastated her family. They seemed like a happy, loving couple, so what happened?

The same occurred to a famous, well-loved dancer called tWitch. He and his wife had three children, the youngest only two years old. And yet, he, too, is gone.

This led me to wonder (and worry) about the children left behind. How do they handle the loss of their father? Do they blame themselves? Each other?

The Defiant Sisters Duet is an exploration of two sisters, Renée and Izzy, affected differently by the loss and how it eats at the family’s dynamics.

Finding Me

Izzy

My life is not like I dreamed it would be. I had the foolish fantasy of finishing high school, going to college, making something of myself- maybe even becoming famous.

Instead, I’m the infamous kid of the father who killed himself in the family’s backyard.

How’s that for a legacy?

Renée

I came home for my mother’s funeral, but I’m staying to mend bridges with my sister. We have another chance, and whatever it takes, we need to come together as a family or live the rest of our lives knowing we let our brother down.

They say pride goes before a fall, but it doesn’t tell us how to avoid the scrapes along the way.

Excerpt:

I bow my head, unable to watch Mom’s final journey as the Pastor prays about forgiveness, mercy, and the joy of Heaven. In my experience, the path to the great beyond is one filled with gaping fissures waiting to steal a soul. It stole my father’s and tried to take Benjamin’s when he nearly drowned a couple of weeks ago. Some days, I feel myself teetering on the edge and wonder whether taking that step back is worth the effort.

“Come on.” Renée nudges my elbow. “Everyone is waiting for us to leave so they can, too. You’re doing great, Izz. Hang on, okay?” She gives me what’s meant to be a reassuring smile, then leans in front of me to address Ben. “Benjamin, I’m going to need you to be strong for a while longer. Can you do that?” He frowned but gave his big sister a grudging nod. “Straighten your clothes, then lead us to the back of the hall. We need to line up at the door and thank people for coming.”

Ben and I both shake our heads simultaneously. “I’m outta here,” Ben states, moving toward the aisle.

“Me too.” I leave Renée sputtering.

“Mom would be so proud.” She hurries after us, so we present a pseudo-front that fools no one. “Please, you guys. Don’t leave me to handle this on my own.”

Are you kidding me right now? I twirl on my heel and stab my finger into her shoulder. “You don’t get to order us around. If we leave, it will be our decision, not yours and not theirs.” I wave my arm to include the crowd avidly watching our confrontation. “We aren’t here for them, Renée. They don’t matter. Mom does. And she’s about to be placed in a hole in the ground. Don’t you get it? She’s gone!”

Tears make it hard to see, but I stumble after Ben anyway, knowing he’s suffering as much as I am. He was Mom’s baby boy. The youngest, spoiled by all of us, but especially Mom. He kept her going after Dad died. Gave her a reason to get up in the morning and raise her head high when she would have preferred to hide in shame. The two of them were a team, and now Ben is alone, and that frightens me.

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Jacquie Biggar is an award-winning author of romance who has been listed on USA Today’s bestseller list. Her writing is centered around tough, alpha male characters who fall for strong and independent contemporary women. She resides on Vancouver Island with her husband and would love to hear from readers worldwide!

In her own words: “My name is Jacquie Biggar. When I’m not being a klutz, I’m a wife, a mother of one, a grandmother, and a butler to my calico cat. Watching reality TV shows such as The Voice and Amazing Race is one of my guilty pleasures. Every Monday night, you can find me laughing at the judge’s shenanigans as I’m plastered to my armchair. I love hanging out with my husband at the beach, taking pictures, and reading romance novels (what else?). I have a slight obsession with Tim Hortons, enjoy gardening, everything pink, and talking to my friends.”

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Books That Changed Me: 2024 Spring Edition! @MaeClair1 @JanSikes3 @Sandra_Cox #writingcommunity #whattoread #springreading #mustread #readinglist

Title: 2024 Books that changed me spring edition with flowers in background

Happy Spring (—or Fall)!

The sun is shining here after a normal season of rain, although not snow. I won’t complain though after the over-achieving snow year before. I love when the flowers peek out and the birds have returned. It’s the time of renewal and to get out into your garden.

If you aren’t out enjoying the flowers or warmer weather, you might want a good book to curl up with. You have already seen my reviews, so now I’m sharing the blurb and where to purchase them. If you add one to your reading list, you will have some fantastic reading ahead!

Here are my three top spring reading picks in no particular order:


keeping place book cover

In the town of Hornwood, the past is always present . . .

Nicole Seabrooke has been wracked with guilt since the night of her younger sister’s disappearance ten years ago. Her mother, Glory, tasked her with watching over Janie. Instead, Nicole dragged her to a high school party, then failed to keep an eye on her. Police believed she drowned, but her body was never found.

A decade later, her remains are discovered.

Nicole returns to Hornwood when new evidence indicates Janie’s death may have been a homicide. With the help of Detective Vin McCain, her high school boyfriend, Nicole begins to piece together what took place the night her sister disappeared—a task that further complicates her relationship with Glory and places Nicole in the crosshairs of a killer. One who will do whatever it takes to keep the truth about Janie’s death from being revealed.

Even if it means killing again.

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A shocking proposal that changes everything.
Desperate to honor his father’s dying wish, Layken Martin vows to do whatever it takes to save the family farm.
Once the Army discharges him following World War II, Layken returns to Missouri to find his legacy in shambles and in jeopardy. A foreclosure notice from the bank doubles the threat. He appeals to the local banker for more time—a chance to rebuild, plant, and harvest crops and time to heal far away from the noise of bombs and gunfire.
But the banker firmly denies his request. Now what?
Then, the banker makes an alternative proposition—marry his unwanted daughter, Sara Beth, in exchange for a two-year extension. Out of options, money, and time, Layken agrees to the bargain.
Now, he has two years to make a living off the land while he shares his life with a stranger.
If he fails at either, he’ll lose it all.

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There’s a new sheriff in town.
Instead of chasing bounties all over the state, Keeper Tyree has taken the job of sheriff of El Dorado.
Everything is going well. He’s tamed the town and now he doesn’t have to knock more than a few heads together a day, and has no more than one or two occupants in the calaboose at a time. Then a stranger comes to town. A stranger bent on vengeance and the man he wants to bring down is Keeper.
Mitchell Jordan holds Keeper personally responsible for his dad being hung. He believes in an eye for an eye and he’s out to even the score. A family member for a family member.
Keeper is tough and fearless, except where his loved ones are concerned. They’re his one weakness and there’s nothing he won’t do to keep them safe. No matter which side of the law he has to come down on. There’s no right or wrong, there’s just taking care of his own. And now they’ve been threatened.
Jordan leads Keeper out of El Dorado down a winding trail of danger and deceit, and that trail won’t end till one of them is lying boots up six feet under.

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Embrace your inner child, read a good book! Happy Spring, D. L. Finn

New Release! “A Beggar’s Bargain” by Jan Sikes @JanSikes3 #writingcommunity #newrelease #whattoread #historicalromance

I’m thrilled to have Jan Sikes here today today and share the good news of a new release, “A Beggar’s Bargain!” It was released yesterday and I have started reading it! Been looking forward to this one, and a review will follow!

I am so excited to be kicking off a blog tour for my new book at your blog site, Denise. Thank you so much for allowing me to take over.

Very often, authors are asked where the inspiration stories come from and, as a reader, I’m always interested in hearing the answers.

Therefore, I’m going to start this tour with my inspiration for A Beggar’s Bargain.

I am an avid fan of Texas music and the artists who make the music. So, anytime I am in the car, my radio is always on and most often on a local station that plays the indie artists I enjoy and follow.

Each afternoon, I drive out to my daughter’s to take care of the grandchildren for a few hours until she and her husband get off work. I was on my way out one afternoon when a new song caught my attention. I listen to the lyrics, always looking for a message or two. And this one grabbed me.

I had to pull over and jot down “A Beggar’s Bargain,” having no idea what the story would be, but I had the title. Those three words rolled around in my head for a while before the story started to form. First came the time period. It needed to be set in the 1940s following World War II. Then came the setting. Most of the stories I’ve written have been set in Texas (write what you know and all that.) But this one needed some place different. I went back and forth between Oklahoma and Missouri, finally settling on Missouri because my mother was born there. Then I got a map and searched out small towns in the southern part of the state and landed on the tiny town of Everton. Bingo! I had the time and place. Next came the characters.

But I digress. The inspiration for this story came from this song by The Damn Quails (yes, that’s their real name), if you’d like to listen.

https://youtu.be/4s8oH5Libqs?si=wrYBJtyx8ddHp22w

You never know where an idea will come from. It keeps us on our toes!

Book Blurb:

A shocking proposal that changes everything.

Desperate to honor his father’s dying wish, Layken Martin vows to do whatever it takes to save the family farm.

Once the Army discharges him following World War II, Layken returns to Missouri to find his legacy in shambles and in jeopardy. A foreclosure notice from the bank doubles the threat. He appeals to the local banker for more time—a chance to rebuild, plant, and harvest crops and time to heal far away from the noise of bombs and gunfire.

Only the banker firmly denies his request. Now what?

Then, the banker makes an alternative proposition—marry his unwanted daughter, Sara Beth, in exchange for a two-year extension. Out of options, money, and time, Layken agrees to the bargain.

Now, he has two years to make a living off the land while he shares his life with a stranger.

If he fails at either, he’ll lose it all.

UNIVERSAL PURCHASE LINK:

https://books2read.com/u/3nqqEo

 

BOOK TRAILER LINK:

https://youtu.be/G6vMqD4SuQ4?si=aZG6RCZbFlhJfuxB


One more thing! I will be a guest on the Fresh Ink Podcast tonight. Here is more information and the link.

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http://www.jansikes.com

https://www.twitter.com/jansikes3

http://www.facebook.com/AuthorJanSikesBooks

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https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/7095856.Jan_Sikes

From Finn’s Forest #12 #writingcommunity #authors #writers #poetry #poem #snow #muse #sledding

Hi,

Poetry has been lacking in my life for several months, other than what I did for a project and to release my latest collection last fall. My focus has been on editing a book I wrote a few years ago during NaNoWri. This is finally coming together thanks to my critique partners. My Christmas collection, I hope to get to soon.

We’ll see when spring comes if my muse returns from her vacation.

In the meantime, I thought I’d write a poem to try to wake up my inner poet using a picture taken by my hubby during our last storm on the Magical Trail. Yes, that’s me sledding. Images or being in nature seem to inspire me— most of the time. So here goes:

riding the storm’s waves
as only a child can do
joy captures my heart

What do you do when your creativity takes a leave of absence?

NOTE: Watch for tomorrow’s post!

Let your inner child embrace all life’s seasons. D. L. Finn

 

March Book Reviews! @maryjdressel @teagangeneviene @NAGrangerAuthor @LisetteBrodey @JillWeatherholt #writingcommunity #whattoread #mustread #bookreviews

Here are the books I read in February that were four stars and higher. Click on the book titles for an Amazon universal link.

Blue Snow in the Moonlight Cover with cowboy and ranch

Blue Snow in the Moonlight: A Holiday Romance

By Mary J. McCoy-Dressel

Cullen, a father of two, is at a local event when he spots the most beautiful woman, Elle, whose eyes pull him in. They seemed to connect from a distance until his sister hugged him and broke the spell. He and his family start back to the ranch during a huge snowstorm when his vehicle breaks down. Luckily, someone comes by and gives them a ride to his rental or where this woman is staying. Culleen conceals his identity as the owner and gets acquainted with the woman he’s attracted to. The problem is they both come from bitter relationships and divorces, neither is willing to dive into a relationship again. What was obvious to everyone around them wasn’t to Elle and Cullen. I loved Cullen and his bond with his children and sister. The setting was my favorite part of the story, a ranch in North Dakota during snowstorms. Not only was there matchmaking going on from unexpected people but doubt and distrust mixed into it. A romantic flirtation was front and center, but the rest was behind closed doors. If you love stories set on ranches, like I do, and a good snowstorm or two mixed in with an attraction that may or may not work out, this story is for you!

Atonement in Zugzwang: Book 1

By Teagan Ríordáin Geneviene

Pepper inherits a remodeled gas station from her uncle in Atonement. As soon as she arrives in Atonement, Pepper ends up in the middle of a mysterious chess game and her uncle’s body goes missing. I always love a visit to Atonement—you never know who you’ll meet there. Much of this story I read on Ms. Geneviene‘s blog, but it’s nice to read it all at once. I loved the relationship Pepper had with her friend Maudie and, of course, the special kitten captured my heart. It was great to see familiar faces return to this story, including the pigs and Ralda. An enjoyable read with unusual characters you can’t help but root for, well, most of them. I look forward to the next story to be released, so I can see what happens next.

The Rat In The Python: Book 2 Shopping and Food

By Alex Craigie

I enjoyed “Rat in the Python: Book 1” a lot and equally adored this next installment with Shopping and Food. One thing that brought back many memories was the stamps saved from shopping or, what I remember, blue-chip stamps. My mother collected stamps not only from shopping but unused ones from neighbors, friends, and family. She was determined to get a grandfather clock, and she did. I helped paste many books of stamps. This book brings back all those splendid memories and history along with them. I didn’t have to go through any rationing, so I found that part very interesting, but I enjoyed all the canned and frozen foods that followed. This is a wonderful read for those who grew up in these times and like a trip down memory lane, or for those who want to learn how it used to be. Well written and entertaining all around.

 

Death at the Asylum: Rhe Brewster Mystery Series, Book 5

By N.A. Granger

“Death at the Asylum” is the fifth in the Rhe Brewster Series, but the third one I’ve read. It can easily be read as a standalone story with the author’s character recaps in the beginning, which I’ve appreciated. Rhe and Sam are enjoying a nice day and the governor’s speech when a sniper shoots the governor. The couple jumped into action to save him. Now they need to find the sniper. But that isn’t all going on. Someone has gotten hold of Rhe’s personal information putting debts in her name along with crimes. If that wasn’t enough for her to deal with between being pregnant, working two jobs, and raising a son, there is a rapist loose and someone stealing drugs at the hospital, too. Not only was this a page-turner, but there were enough criminal details woven in to add that extra layer. It is the relationships, though, that are the strength of the story, between husband and wife, mother and son, best friends and colleagues. I not only wanted the crimes to get solved, but the people to remain safe while doing it. A well-written cozy mystery that I can highly recommend. I can’t wait for the next book to see what happens next.

Death in a Mudflat (Rhe Brewster #4)

By N.A. Granger

Although this is the fourth book in the series, it is the second one I’ve read since I started in the middle, and very easy to follow. I do plan to go back and see how it all got started, but for now, I’m enjoying moving forward in this cozy mystery series. Rhe is not only a widowed mother and an ER nurse but a detective, too. She is now together with the man who was her brother-in-law and who is her boss at the police station, too. This couple was at a wedding on the beach when a body was found. Rhe embarks on a hunt to not only find this woman’s killer but also to uncover the truth behind college students dying from drug overdoses. This puts her in the middle of two investigations, one where the FBI is involved. I love how determined Rhe is to find the truth, even at her own expense. Her new relationship with Sam is endearing and the loyalty of her best friend is impressive. This is a page-turner as Rhe pushes forward and gets into unsafe situations. At one point, she learns what it is like to be on the other side of that or the one worrying. There is a lot of detailed information that adds a great layer to a well-written whodunit that I can easily recommend.

TWICE A BROKEN BREATH

By Lisette Brodey

Liam stops at the bank only to find out all his money is gone, and accounts are closed. In a panic, he rushes home to find his wife had left him for her first love and taken their daughter with them. There is a note explaining they are leaving the country within twenty-four hours with a powerful threat he’d never see his daughter again if he followed her or called the authorities. Knowing time is of the essence, he goes where he thinks his wife and child will be in New York. He hops on a train in this fast-paced chase that doesn’t slow down until almost the very end. Liam is a multi-layered character who not only has forgotten the first fourteen years of his life because of an accident, but his wife has deceived him, and he now only has a limited time to find the daughter he cherishes. It’s a heavy load, but he finds help in unexpected places along the way, along with people who don’t want him looking. There were many unexpected twists, a couple I had a hunch about, but it all added to Liam’s confusion and determination. I finally got to catch my breath close to the end as it all came together. An exciting page-turner for those who like a thriller with heart and one I can easily recommend.

Their Inseparable Bond

By Jill Weatherholt

Olivia, a divorced ER doctor from Miami, comes to small-town Bluebell, CO to bring her grandmother, Myrna, to live with her. The problem is that even with her deteriorating eyesight, Myrna doesn’t want to leave her home and friends. Olivia meets Myrna’s friends, including the widower Jake and his twins, Kyle and Kayla. Jake trains service dogs and has a puppy Callie, who he thinks would be a good fit for family friend Myrna, to help her stay home. Olivia must decide if the untrained pup could be an option, or if she should stick to the plan and insist her grandmother leave. In the mix is Olivia’s developing friendship with Jake and his children and a bit of matchmaking. I love not only the budding possible romance between Olivia and Jake but also the relationship that develops between Olivia and the children and Callie. A heartwarming Christian story that shows how faith mixed with forgiveness can offer a glimpse of that second chance. A quick uplifting read that I can easily recommend.

Embrace your inner child, read a good book! D. L. Finn