From Finn’s Forest #21! #writingcommunity #cedars #forest #healing #pollen #setting #nature

Hi welcome to the first Finn’s Forest of the year.

I haven’t been walking in the forest much even though the sun has been shining. I still miss my walking partner, our dog Sara. My husband gets home too late or dark for our walk. I don’t mind running into wild animals, but I’d rather not do it alone… Another reason to stay inside is the pollen from the cedars. It’s covered everything like a blanket of snow. So I’ve been making use of my mini trampoline.

Usually, the rains wash away this pollen this time of year. We’ve had a usually dry January. But it made me wonder about what the trees were doing. After some research, I found out they release pollen after a cold front and it’s dry and windy out. It is how they reproduce with the help of the wind. This requires a high amount of pollen to get the job done. This seems to work for them, I find little cedars everywhere. They’re considered weeds here since we need to keep our forest cleaned up for the fire season. The Ashe Juniper tree in Texas is in the cedar family and does the same thing.

Pollen on our skylight
This is our skylight in the bathroom. That is the cedar pollen, along with some pine needles.

Now I know why they do release their pollen in January, but digging deeper I  found some interesting information:

  • Cherokee tradition believes that the cedar holds powerful spirits that protect them. A spiritual leader may carry cedar wood in their medicine bag. It can also be placed above entrances for protection.
  • Native Americans used the cedar for medicine for things like joint pain, fever, cough, and other issues. Considered one of the four sacred medicines.
  • Ancient Sumerians believed it was where the divine ones lived.
cedar bark
This is a close-up of the cedar outside my window and the closest one to the house.
  • Its general spiritual meaning believes the tree connects us to our earthly roots. It is a symbol of nobility, strength, and incorruptibility. It’s been called the Tree of Life protected by the gods and believed to have healing properties.
  • Can be used for smudging to clear a space and is believed to carry prayers and wishes from the earth into the sky.
  • Tea can be made from the leaves for respiratory issues. You can also use the leaves in steam for congestion, cedar oil for skin conditions, or in a bath with the essential oil or leaves. Always consult your health provider, there can be side effects and allergies. Not recommended if pregnant, breastfeeding, or have kidney issues.
  • The tree can detour termites and carpenter ants, along with discouraging mold.
cedar in forest
This is the full shot of the cedar. We had to have someone trim the branches up because they were touching the roof. So far they haven’t made us cut this tree down. We have a squirrel family that lives there and an owl.
  • The smell can relax you and the trees purify the air.
  • On the more negative side, I found one superstition that if you plant a cedar, which I haven’t, when it grows tall enough to shade a grave, it’s your time to leave the earth.

Our forest is filled with cedars. We have a huge one right outside our bedroom window protecting us. I won’t complain when they release their pollen anymore but it would be fun to add some of this to a story. What if a character is allergic and drank some tea? Maybe a character needs healing. Cedars can add that extra dimension to a story even if it’s just in the setting.

Embrace your inner child, take a walk in nature, and then read a book. D. L. Finn

Creative Perspective Challenge One Links and short story! #writingcommunity #shortstory #writinglinks #creativeperspectivechallenge

Hi!

It’s been a fantastic week full of amazing writing—and I had fun writing a short story. Thank you to those who joined in and forgive me if this is a day late. I wanted to give Diana’s book the attention it deserved!

If you haven’t seen these posts I highly recommend visiting.

Here’s the list:

Yvette Callerio: BLOG LINK 

Jan Sikes: BLOG LINK

Sandra Cox: BLOG LINK

See notes after the story.

Now here’s my part in the challenge at 986 words:

“Person Standing and Holding Lamp Inside Cave”
by Jeremy Bishop

Their Place

This is where love happened, where Tom met Maggie on a geology tour.

“I proposed to you on this date standing right here, didn’t I, Maggie?” Tom sighed loudly and held up his light. “Today though, I’m alone except for a cat who isn’t happy to be in his carrier. No tours. No you.”

Tom smoothed the powdery red dirt with his shoe. Even when the tours stopped and the mining began again, they always returned to their cave. When they returned, Maggie had said she felt a mix of sadness and joy. Tom had pushed aside his feelings because the damage from the mining was done.

Luckily, they left this little heaven alone. In a chaotic world, Maggie and Tom found solace in each other and this cave.

“You were right, Maggie. It was the end of times. I argued there has always been greed and it was nothing new but I was wrong. At least the mining stopped when the war ended.” Tom turned and pulled his mattress from where he dropped it and placed it on a tarp.

The minerals from the mine were no longer necessary. People had to take care of themselves to stay alive, just like he’d been doing.

“I grieved hard when you died from cancer, Maggie. Hard. But with time, I realized it was best for you to be in your heaven — a place I truly hope exists—because we tore this world apart. Your gentle heart would have been crushed. Five years. Five long years, I’ve lived without you. I survived that and I survived the war. But after the war,  there was no one left to lead. No power, no gas, limited food, and no communication. It’s like living in the Middle Ages.”

Tom set Maggie’s picture on the small table he’d brought in. She was standing at the cave entrance with a smile as bright as the sun. It was her twenty-ninth birthday, or six months before they got the news, she only had a few months to live. He sank into the only chair he had brought. There’d be no company to entertain other than the black cat, Tumbles, whom he’d found after Maggie died—or perhaps Tumbles found him. The cat would excel as a mouser and provide companionship in the chilly, dark cave.

He wouldn’t have had to go into hiding if criminals hadn’t taken over their little town, and those who voiced their opinions disappeared. The new rulers were the worst of humanity. He urged his neighbors to go before it was too late, but he was the only one who left with a pickup truck full of his belongings.

“I used the remaining gas I had to come here. I couldn’t think of anywhere else to go except our place. The main entry is destroyed, but we knew a secret entrance, didn’t we Maggie? Good thing there’s a water supply in the cave below us. It’s not too polluted, but I have that water filter you insisted we get in case anything happened. Good call. Don’t worry, I brought our wedding album and pictures, along with your mother’s teapot that you loved. Thanks to all our camping I have some top-grade gear that will come in handy, including that tent stove with the exhaust pipe. There’s plenty of dead wood in the forest and I brought that rod to start fires. The solar generator will be handy as well. I can listen to our records and have a reading lamp.”

Tom stood and brushed the red dirt off his pants. He brought in the heavy boxes of canned and dehydrated food he stocked up on during the fighting, plus the rest of the supplies while his cat waited not so patiently in the truck. They had enough food to last at least a year without his hunting. But he had plenty of ammo for his shotgun. Finally, he brought Tumbles in.

“I got it set up for you, Tumbles. You can come out and see your new home.” The gray tiger-striped cat sniffed the air and refused to leave his safe cat carrier. “You’ll like it you’ll see. Plenty of room to roam and I brought your favorite cat tower.” Tumbles closed his eyes and didn’t exit his familiar space.

After Tom unloaded the boxes containing towels, soap, candles, clothes, bedding, pots, dishes, pens, notepads, books, and all the rest he felt were essential, he arranged them in the shelving unit from the garage. The empty boxes were neatly against the cave wall.

“Be right back, Tumbles.”

Not even a swish of a tail for a response.

Next to the cave, Tom pushed the last of his world over the cliff. The old blue pickup lay in a broken pile like the rest of civilization.

“All set Maggie. If it’s safe, I’ll try fishing at that little lake nearby. Now it’s just Tumbles, me, and our memories until the end. Then we’ll be together.”

He glanced back at the burned pines blanketed by flowers and the grass that had found its way back, along with some animals. Tom entered his new home. He’d explore later and see if the miners left anything behind. Maybe he’d find useful stuff to savage. Yes, he was set. He smiled to see Tumbles lying on his bed, but the grin disappeared when Maggie’s spicy perfume filled the cave.

“Maggie?” Tumbles stood and stared behind Tom, who shuddered. “Are you here?” A white glow appeared next to him filling him with love.

A gentle voice whispered into his ear, “I’m here.”

“Oh Maggie, I miss you.”

“I miss you too, but you’re needed here. Be strong my love.”

The scent and glow disappeared, but the love didn’t. Tom sank onto his mattress and gathered Tumbles into his arms feeling hope. Someday, in a place where love exists, everything will be okay again.


NOTES

  • Watch for Creative Perspective Challenge Two on February 11th!
  • I created a new page on my website with the rules and a list of posts for all those who participated links and what I came up with. LINK

New Release! Tale of the Seasons’ Weaver by D. Wallace Peach #newrelease #fantasy #dwallacepeach #writingcommunity

I’m so excited to have Diana here today to share in her latest release, Tale of the Seasons’ Weaver! Here’s my five-star review 🙂 LINK

Thanks so much for kindly hosting me on Day 6 of my tour, Denise.  It’s a delight to head south into northern California’s wintery weather today and visit with you and your followers.

Thus far, on my tour, I’ve been sharing the folklore origins of my magical beings, creatures, and monsters on which the characters of the Tale of the Seasons’ Weaver are based. Today, I’m going in a different direction and talking about my thoughts behind autumn and the personification of the season in the Autumn Prince.

He’s a main character, full of romantic possibility, and I couldn’t leave him on the tour’s sidelines.

To me, autumn is a season of contradictions. The days are getting shorter, the light fading. Gardens are going to seed. Worms and bugs are chomping on what’s left of the kale and squash. Rain and cooler weather are harbingers of the coming frost and snow and all the hardships winter brings. Autumn is in many respects a time of drawing back and dying.

And yet, autumn is also welcome, a reprieve from the heat of summer and a time of harvest and plenty. Most of all, it’s astonishingly beautiful. How clever of Mother Nature (or the Autumn Prince) to link such beauty with the process of letting go and dying—to the point that we almost don’t notice the approaching winter until it arrives on our doorsteps.

On the magical isle of Innishold, where glamour holds sway and life is always perfect and everlasting, the charmed courtiers lack emotional complexity. They’re immortal; they’re bored, and they fill their time with dancing and feasting and courtly drama. Suffering, especially human suffering, is alien to them. But not so with the Autumn Prince who lives eternally on the brink of loss.

And perhaps that’s why Erith, half mortal and half charmed, finds him so compelling.

Excerpt: Erith and Brynlan Firesage, the Autumn Prince

I graciously accepted the prince’s invitation, and he whirled me into a dreamlike waltz, his elegance effortless, his every movement a study in grace. Without pause, we transitioned into a brisk twirling sprint that left me warm to my toes. I begged off a third spin around the bonfire, needing a moment to catch my breath, and he accompanied me to the tables where mulled wines and buttery spirits spilled into silver-banded goblets.

“Water please,” I said when he reached for the wine.

“It’s all water.” He filled a goblet. “You will taste wine, smell its flavors, and feel its warmth, but only if you give yourself over to its glamour.” He angled a look at me, awaiting my opinion.

I swirled the ruby liquid rippling in my cup. Perhaps my human half prevented me from seeing the water for what it was. When I braved a sip, I tasted wine, smooth and sweet, infused with hints of winterberry and woodsmoke.

“Wine,” I said with a laugh, my guardedness surrendering at his feet. “You’re not an illusion, are you?”

He studied me through his dark lashes, his amused smile shaded with a melancholy he covered with a quiet chuckle. “Of course. To a degree. Aren’t we all, in some way, illusions?”

“No.”

“Is that so?” His eyebrows rose in challenge. “Tell me, are there times when you hide your feelings? Hold back your words? Pretend you are braver than you feel? Is it truly your nature to dress in black? I suspect those are all illusions.”

“In a sense. But I’m incapable of glamour. I’m half human, part of the mundane world.”

“A coveted mix.” He sipped his wine. “I envy your connection to the human imagination.”

I blinked at the odd confession and turned to the merriment unfolding within the fire’s ring of light. “For most villagers here, it’s the other way around. They envy the magic. They’re dazzled.”

“And those who fear us? Where are they?”

“At home, waiting for spring. They need the change in seasons more than the charmed do. Their lives depend on it.”

“And the charmed depend on them.”

“On humans?” I faced him, smirking at the strange perspective. “I’ve listened to village storytellers who spin tales about the charmed, and it’s usually the other way around. Some accounts are as gentle as a hare, others as fearsome as the wylyali. All wondrously fanciful, and not always true.”

“The difference is imagination.” He tapped his forehead. “Human beings are excellent storytellers. Better than the Mori Duglum. Leagues better than us. You shall see it for yourself.” I gave him a sideways glance, and he chuckled. “You’re skeptical, but I assure you, immortality leads to a numbing level of monotony. Day in and day out, little changes. Thus, it all becomes stale.”

“Unless one accounts for glamour. You can turn anything and everything beautiful.”

“Beauty without substance.” He raised his goblet to the bonfire. “Unlike in the mortal world where stories create history, shape the present, and write the future. What are we but the sum of our joys and tragedies? Where humans use stories to make meaning of their lives, the charmed rely on the human imagination to exist.”

Blurb:

“Already the animals starve. Soon the bonemen will follow, the Moss Folk and woodlings, the watermaids and humans. Then the charmed will fade. And all who will roam a dead world are dead things. Until they too vanish for lack of remembering. Still, Weaver, it is not too late.”

In the frost-kissed cottage where the changing seasons are spun, Erith wears the Weaver’s mantle, a title that tests her mortal, halfling magic.  As the equinox looms, her first tapestry nears completion—a breathtaking ode to spring. She journeys to the charmed isle of Innishold to release the beauty of nature’s awakening across the land.

But human hunters have defiled the enchanted forest and slaughtered winter’s white wolves. Enraged by the trespass, the Winter King seizes Erith’s tapestry and locks her within his ice-bound palace. Here, where comfort and warmth are mere glamours, she may weave only winter until every mortal village succumbs to starvation, ice, and the gray wraiths haunting the snow.

 With humanity’s fate on a perilous edge, Erith must break free of the king’s grasp and unravel a legacy of secrets. In a charmed court where illusions hold sway, allies matter, foremost among them, the Autumn Prince. Immortal and beguiling, he offers a tantalizing future she has only imagined, one she will never possess—unless she claims her extraordinary power to weave life from the brink of death.

Bio

Best-selling author D. Wallace Peach grew up surrounded by her father’s well-loved paperback books. Fantasy was a staple, but it was Tolkien’s The Hobbit that planted the seeds which would grow into a passion for writing.

Peach started writing later in life when years of working in business surrendered to a full-time indulgence in the imaginative world of books. She was instantly hooked.

In addition to fantasy books, Peach’s publishing career includes participation in various anthologies featuring short stories, flash fiction, and poetry. She’s an avid supporter of the arts in her local community, organizing and publishing annual anthologies of Oregon prose, poetry, and photography.

Peach lives in a log cabin amongst the tall evergreens and emerald moss of Oregon’s rainforest with her husband, two owls, a horde of bats, and the occasional family of coyotes.

Links

Tale of the Seasons’ Weaver

Amazon Author Page

Myths of the Mirror Blog

Wallace Peach Books

 

 

Creative Perspective Challenge One #WritingChallenge #flashfiction #poetry #writingcommunity #CreativePerspectiveChallenge

Hi!

Welcome to the first Creative Perspective Challenge! I have wanted to do this for a long time and decided it was the right moment to get started.

What to do for the challenge or the rules:

  • I will provide an image and post it here once a month. I plan on it being the week after my Book Reviews.
  • If inspired by the image, write a poem or flash fiction.
  • Try to keep it under 1000 words, although I know that isn’t always possible, so don’t worry about it if you can’t.
  • Post your story on your website and link it to my post with the image. If you don’t have a blog and I know you, send it to me. I will include it with the links post. Email following.
  • Leave your link in my comments or send it to my email: d.l.finn.author@gmail.com I don’t want to miss a single word written!
  • The following week I will post a list with all the links so you can visit the other posts too! It’s here I will include stories or poems for those who don’t blog and my story or a poem too.

Ready to get creative? Here’ s the image:

“Person Standing and Holding Lamp Inside Cave”
by Jeremy Bishop

I can’t wait to see what you come up with. Good luck!

January Book Reviews! #JacquiMurray #IvyLogan #yvettemcalleiro #DWallacePeach #writingcommunity #bookreviews #whattoread #mustreads

Here are the great books I read in December that were four stars and higher. Click on the book titles for the Amazon link.

Please note my fun news after the reviews!

Endangered Species (Savage Land #1)

By Jacqui Murray

I have been eager to read “Endangered Species.” The story continues focusing on the Neanderthals who are called the People and the Tall Ones who are the homo sapiens. Their lives are about daily survival and hunting, but nature plays a powerful role in this story as they face another challenge. Yu’ung, the healer’s daughter, is a young female in the People. She has been trained to be a hunter, heal, and lead. She has unique abilities to see and read the landscape better than anyone else, but she also gets visions guiding her. Shandar is a young male who doesn’t fit in, but he also gets visions and learns of his life’s path. I love that we are revisited by a favorite character from the past, Xhosa in these visions, along with some favorite canis. Shander and his canis pack’s quest is to find and save Yu’ung and her group while Yu’ung’s is to become the alpha or leader as nature changes their world. The setting is rich and detailed and I can imagine this world from 75000 years ago. It was good to see them cooking now over how their ancestors, like Xhosa, ate their food raw. Told through mainly Yu’ung and Shander’s POV, we do see the world through Yu’ung’s mother the healer’s eyes, and nature’s too. Yu’ung is a character I quickly fell in love with and was rooting for her and her group. I kept urging them to move on as their situation became more dire. A mesmerizing story based on well-researched history that I had a hard time putting down. I read it in two sittings. It is a gift when you can learn as well as be entertained. I highly recommend this and can’t wait for the next story in the series!

And Then You Were Gone

By Ivy Logan

Something has happened to Nina’s daughter, Sophie. I had some guesses about what that could have been but ended up being wrong. The story quickly dove into the past, leading to Nina’s current fears. This is told through Sophie’s diary and Nina’s introspection until Sophie’s narration. Nina had an unsuccessful youthful marriage but found her way in writing books and raising her beloved daughter. They were very close since her ex was no longer in the picture until the bullying began at school for Sophie. She seemed unable to get past it even with her best friend, Nick’s support. This story hooked me from the first page, and I read it in one sitting just to find out what happened to Sophie. While tackling some deep subjects like bullying and its psychological effects, it also dove into family, friendship, and a mother’s love. Unexpected events followed Nina’s well-intentioned efforts. A well-written story that I can highly recommend!

Tale of the Seasons’ Weaver

By D. Wallace Peach

Erith is half human and half charmed/magical and lives in between worlds. She has replaced her deceased mother as The Seasons’ Weaver and has been given the burden of weaving the next season into existence. On the eve of spring, she takes a tapestry into the charmed land. Instead of it being a simple process of changing winter into spring, the King of Winter refuses to allow the change. He insists she continues his season by only weaving winter, but the human world can’t survive if spring doesn’t come. Unprepared for this magical world, she is at a loss on how to fight for what she knows needs to be done. I could easily empathize with Erith as the odds seemed stacked against her, but she didn’t completely give up, either. The relationship between Erith and Autumn’s Prince was easy to root for and the attraction was immediate. The setting was lush and vividly painted, drawing me into both worlds, one of humans and one of magic. In a place where Erith must learn who to trust, she also must trust herself. That is one of my favorite parts as she learns who she is and her place in the world. I recommend this well-written fantasy that had me hooked, eager to discover what would unfold next.

A Christmas Homecoming: A Short Story

By Yvette M Calleiro

Mary has lost her beloved adoptive parents. After spending a year with her cold grandmother, she inherits not only her parents’ money but an address for her birth parents. Having nothing to lose, she hops on a plane to Miami at Christmas. She was told they wanted her to meet them when she turned eighteen but started second-guessing that. What if things had changed? Mary goes from the only home she’s known to a bright, warm world, and a culture she knows nothing about. I love how open she is to meeting her birth parents, but simultaneously giving her chosen parents all the love they deserve for giving her a good life. Each step of her journey she reflects on her past and possible future. Although a fast read, I was involved with Mary’s quest and felt the emotions with her. I can highly recommend this beautiful short story for the holiday season, or anytime, that shows the strength and bond of love and family.


NOTE: Next week I’ll be sharing my Creative Perspective Challenge. It’s something I’ve been wanting to do for a while. There will be an image to inspire you to write flash fiction or poetry. I’d like to keep the word count under 1000 words, but if it goes over no worries, sometimes the story decides for us. The following week I’ll post all the links of those who participated. To start off it will be once a month, the week following my Book Reviews. More information next week!


Embrace your inner child in 2025 and read a good story! D. L. Finn

New Release! Endangered Species: Savage Land Book 1 by Jacqui Murray #jacquimurray #Badlands #book2 #prehistoricalfiction #newrelease #mustread #series

I’m thrilled to have Jacqui Murray here today to celebrate Savage Land Book 1, Endangered Species release, and share her upcoming release Savage Land Book 2, Badlands! I’m a huge fan of her prehistoric fiction and read Endangered Species story in two sittings. Here’s the link to the review of Endangered Species: LINK

Savage Land is the third prehistoric man trilogy in the series, Man. Vs. Nature. Written in the spirit of Jean Auel, Savage Land explores how two bands of humans survived one of the worst natural disasters in Earth’s history, when volcanic eruptions darkened the sky, massive tsunamis crossed the ocean in crushing waves, and raging fires burned the land. Each tribe starring in the story considered themselves apex predators. Neither was. That crown belonged to Nature and she was intent on washing the blight of man from her face.

What Was a Neanderthal Family Like

Neanderthal families by all accounts were small, close-knit groups of ten-twenty members and others related to them. Couples were monogamous, but sex between other tribes resulting in children was not frowned upon. The tribes understood that babies from related tribe members often didn’t thrive which meant they wanted outside seed to keep their groups strong. The tribe cared for children, not just the parents, and children grew up quickly to become contributing members of the group. Though Neanderthals lasted a long time in history and survived harsh natural conditions, their overall size was only about 100,000, spread throughout Eurasia. Finding more of their kind to reproduce with could be daunting! When females mated with a male on a permanent basis, she left her birth tribe and joined his.

Neanderthal women very likely hunted small game such as tortoise, rabbits, and birds–probably accompanied by babies and children. Because their body sizes were similar to men–somewhat smaller and less muscular but not significantly–they could hunt bigger game but how often they did doesn’t preserve well over time for us to tell.

Tribe members did not specialize in jobs though each might be seen as more skilled in a particular job than others (like making spears or hide clothing). All tribe members were expected to become accomplished in all tribe jobs. The reason for this–again–is obvious. The tribe size was small and their lives dangerous. It made sense if a hunter was killed, others could step in to do his tasks with no problems.  The average life expectance was between 30-40 years though there are good examples of those who lived longer.

Again because tribes were small and life dangerous, Neanderthals became skilled at treating illnesses and injuries. There is much evidence that they cared for injured and sick tribe members for extended periods of time–decades, even–in a compassionate and caring way.

Childhood was much like what we experience today in that children learned through play, performed tasks according to their skill and maturity. There weren’t vast numbers of children around for youngsters to interact with so they were likely to grow up faster than today’s children with less supervision.

There isn’t a lot of evidence of burial rites, but death was treated respectfully, with an understanding that dead bodies can carry diseases. There is some evidence that loved family members were buried with flowers, even favorite tools, but not enough to draw conclusions.

 In Endangered Species, Book One of the trilogy, Yu’ung’s Neanderthal tribe must align with Fierce’s Tall Ones—a Homo sapiens tribe–on a cross-continent journey that starts in the Siberian Mountains. The goal: a new homeland far from the devastation caused by the worst volcanic eruption ever experienced by Man. How they collaborate despite their instinctive distrust could end the journey before it starts or forge new relationships that will serve both well in the future.

Excerpt:

Chapter 1 of Endangered Species

75,000 years ago,

What we call Germany today

 Jun was lost. Again. He gripped his thick-shafted spear in one hand, throwing stones in the other, and brushed aside the prickle of fear that flooded his body.

It wasn’t being alone that worried him. This was his first time hunting with the clan. He’d wanted to do well.

Initially, Jun had kept pace with the hunters, his strides long and easy, eyes firmly locked on the back of the male in front of him, but—as too often happened—he became distracted by a bird’s call and wandered off to find it, maybe talk to it. Someone shouted his name, far away and so muted, he barely heard it. He didn’t respond, of course. Upright voices would frighten the bird if it hadn’t already fled. He hunkered into the underbrush, reduced his breathing, and squatted there long … longer … but the bird fell silent.

I’ll look for it next time I’m out here.

He stood. Feet spread, ears perked, he twisted around, and to his horror, didn’t recognize where he was. Nor did he hear the sounds of his fellow hunters moving along Deer’s trail.

I wandered farther than I intended, and hurried away, through the leaves and dirt, hoping to find Deer’s trace or his clan’s prints, but found neither so he shouted. The sound echoed harshly through the trees.

No response.

They can’t be far. By now, they must know I’m not with them.

He hugged his arms around his chest, suddenly cold, and tilted his head up. Sun had moved, a lot. Instead of worrying him, it comforted him.

I’ll stay here until they return.

He crouched, picked at the forest’s hearty overgrowth, ate a few worms, and waited. No one came. He called several times, but all he heard were insects, a snake slithering, and squirrels chattering.

I’ll go where Deer is.

He knew where the herd headed because he’d followed it several times to where it ate the fresh young grasses, safe, it thought, from prying eyes. He trotted down what he hoped would end up their trail, searching for trace, listening for the rustle of hide-covered bodies passing through dense brush carrying carcasses. Finally, later than expected, he found Deer’s path, but they didn’t stop in their usual place. They must have known they were being stalked—the hunters were noisy—and trotted into a scree pile as though knowing that would conceal prints, which it did. Jun could either keep wandering until he re-located the clan’s path or make his way back to the camp.

He checked Sun, but it was now hidden by clouds.

He crouched, comfortable in his waiting. No one would be surprised. He often returned late with tales of an excursion rather than armloads of meat to feed the clan. The group would have ejected him, forcing him to make his way alone, but his mother was the clan healer and wouldn’t allow it. She was training him to take over when her stiff joints and failing eyesight meant she could no longer fulfill her duties. He had no interest in illnesses, but understood he must fulfill some duty or lose the tribe’s protection. As a result, he assisted her if he couldn’t avoid it and learned enough about herbs and mulches and poultices to be tolerated.

None of which helped him now.

I can’t wait, and scrambled up a hillock, found a landmark he knew, and headed toward it along a debris-laden forest floor, head up, eyes shut to concentrate on a panoply of delightful odors. He heard the hiss but as background noise to his meandering daydreams. By the time it stiffened his  hackles and his eyes popped open, it was too late.

Snake!

Jun stabbed with his spear, to frighten not kill, but missed. Snake didn’t. A blur of movement and pain seared through Jun’s body. He collapsed with a thud and Snake slithered away. Jun attempted to stand and crumpled.

I’ll crawl along the path. The hunters will see me on their way back. Sweat broke out across his forehead. As will predators.

He scuttled into the dirt-clotted root ball of a towering tree, sharing the cozy space with worms, slugs, and spiders.

I’ll call out if I hear someone.

He tamped down the pain and dug through his shoulder sack. No surprise, he forgot to restock his treatments. He tried to blink the dust from his eyes and then rubbed, using the cleanest part of a grubby finger. He mulled over what to do as his ankle swelled bigger than his calf and heat flushed through his body. Everything around him spun and his eyes drooped. The more he strained to think, the more his head throbbed. He tucked his legs against his chest and imagined Snake’s poison infecting his insides.

How do I stop it before it stops me?

He solved it by passing out.

The scrape of a foot awoke Jun. Every part of his body hurt, but he managed to crack one eye. An Upright female not his kind strode toward him, a spear in one hand and a blistering frown on her face. He should say something, but his mouth was too dry.

She acts like she knows me.

He tried to rise, but no part of his body cooperated so he stared at her, worried and somewhat disturbed by the dark fury she directed at him.

Why is she so angry? I’ve done nothing to her.

Seeing his swollen red ankle did nothing to soften her attitude. Disgust washed over her in waves and her fists clenched a rough-hewn lance so tightly, the whites of her knuckles gleamed.

There is something familiar about her….

She had the small skull, long limbs, and narrow torso of a Primitive, lacking the musculature common to Jun’s kind. And it hit him.

“Xhosa?”

She growled in response, a sound so like hatred, he would have pulled back if the tree trunk didn’t stop him.

The female Xhosa visited his dreams often and they got along well. They discussed topics no one shared his interest in—where the herds went during their migrations, why Spider’s thin silken strands were so strong, why Sun left if Moon arrived. Did one orb fear the other or had they arranged to share the sky in this way? These types of curious queries annoyed everyone in his tribe, but excited Xhosa.

“Why are you here? I only see you in dreams.” He squiggled, attempted to stand, and collapsed. “Am I dreaming?”

“No, Shanadar. You have forced me to come in person. Night is approaching. It is not safe to be out here alone. Return to your homebase. I have plans for you and being eaten by Cat isn’t one of them.”

Her lips didn’t move nor were her words the clan’s, but he understood what she said. He wanted to ask why she cared if the night stalkers ate him, but what he said was something else entirely.

“Snake poisoned me.”

Shock flashed through her eyes and she scowled. “I see. You won’t be leaving on schedule.”

His head spun, started to ask what schedule, but stopped himself. Whatever the answer no longer mattered.

“Xhosa. Snake killed me. Well, there are treatments for Snake’s venom, but I didn’t bring them. Mother has them, but I can’t get to her fast enough. And the hunters—I don’t know what happened to them. They should have come by now….”

His voice trailed off. Talking exhausted him. Still, he owed her one more explanation. “Whatever your plan, it can no longer include me.”

She dismissed him with a flip of her fingers. “You’re not going to die, Shanadar. Come. My kith can take care of you.”

“Shanadar,” he mumbled. “She keeps calling me Shanadar.” She didn’t explain why and he didn’t ask. Or mind.

But he did ask about kith as Xhosa yanked him to his feet—foot, the injured one dangling uselessly above the ground—encircled her arm around his waist and draped his around her shoulder before replying.

“You call your group a clan. Ours is kith. The Tall Ones are a band, the Canis Pack.”

Tall Ones? He tried to make sense of her answer, but the words got lost in his muddy thoughts.

I’ll ask later.

They slid through the forest, well beyond his clan’s area and Deer’s favorite eating spots, past a tree tall enough to touch Sun. He’d never seen it before. Did it just grow? Soon, they reached a gathering of Primitives the size of Jun’s clan crouched by an overhang. All had low foreheads, prominent brow ridges, and body shapes like a shorter version of the tall slender strangers who occasionally passed through the clan’s territory—

That’s who she called Tall Ones!

The kith members wore long wraps or capes like Xhosa’s, unsewn, as though they simply cut a hole in a pelt big enough for their head to push through. No capes or wraps, and foot coverings were fur or bark strapped to feet.

But the dark, deep eyes, fixed on the new arrival, shone with intelligence. They blinked a greeting before resuming their work.

“They expected us?”

“No. They have adjusted to strangers trailing in here with me.”

Jun’s eyes popped open. “Other Uprights?”

She chuckled, the first smile he’d seen from her since she showed up. “Usually pawed and tailed.”

He had no idea what to ask about that and didn’t bother trying. Ignoring the growing ache in his leg took all his energy. She has much to explain, but it will wait until I recover.

Xhosa pushed him gently toward a boulder. “Crouch there.”

He collapsed. His good leg was numb. Even if she hadn’t told him to rest, he couldn’t have gone farther. The relief to his pounding ankle was overwhelming. He stilled his entire body, his breathing shallow as another Primitive approached, holding supplies eerily similar to those Jun’s mother carried. Then, before he could blink, she cut across Snake’s puncture and squeezed. He started to scream, but stopped because he felt nothing. The poison dried up and Xhosa scrubbed the puncture. Once she deemed it clean, she applied moss to suck out new impurities, as his mother would. All Xhosa’s ministrations were like his mother’s except Xhosa’s didn’t hurt. Mother’s always did.

Xhosa rotated back on her heels with a grunt of either satisfaction or hopelessness. Jun was too hot, tired, and sick to care.

She stood. “I will deposit you where I found you. You will awake groggy, feeling unwell, but you will be fine.”

When I awake? What does she mean?

“I am—”

But Xhosa wasn’t listening.

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Jacqui Murray is the author of the popular prehistoric fiction saga, Man vs. Nature which explores seminal events in man’s evolution one trilogy at a time. She is also author of the Rowe-Delamagente thrillers and Building a Midshipman , the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy. Her non-fiction includes 100+ books on tech into education, reviews as an Amazon Vine Voice and a freelance journalist on tech ed topics. 

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