#CreativePerspectiveChallenge Five Results! #flashfiction #poetry #writingcommunity

Here’s the creative perspective others took on the below image:

Yvette Calleiro: LINK

Sandra Cox: LINK

My turn:

WILLIE (1000 words)

With a heavy heart, Samuel made his final nightly round as the head of the lake’s security force. The moonlight reflected off the murky, but still water. He was relieved no one was breaking the curfew. It was never a pleasant exchange if he encountered anyone wandering by the lake.

Only four years ago, this job had been a blessing following being shot after chasing a robbery suspect. Leaving the city and that job behind, he moved his wife and two young daughters to the lake where he’d enjoyed many childhood vacations. His family settled in and loved the peace of lakeside living. Unfortunately, everything changed one July afternoon when a huge green creature attacked a boat and a family of four. Their bodies never recovered.

Officials quickly evacuated people and there were many attempts to kill the creature. First, they dropped bombs into the still waters but never hit the creature. Bullets bounced off its green scales and the last attempt was poison delivered by a crop-dusting plane. The creature jumped high enough to snatch the plane in its large, heavily toothed jaw. The plane was spit out like a watermelon seed. The pilot was never recovered. The creature kept its snake-like eyes above water for days, watching. It was during this time they learned it could breathe air as well as water.

Competing theories emerged that included dinosaurs and aliens. The one thing everyone agreed on was the demise of its food source might force it to venture out of the lake.

“After confirming with local experts, we are restocking the lake with fish. From observation, it only wants to survive and eat,” Mayor Warner announced.

With great fanfare, it was done, and all was quiet.

Six months later, the Mayor made another announcement. “Welcome home Williams Lake residents! Willie, as he has been named, had only been defending himself. Although we won’t be fishing, boating, or swimming, I see a prosperous future with tourism. People want to see our unique lake creature.”

For three years, Mayor Warner was right. People visited from all parts of the world to see the giant monster. Locals grew rich. Willie seemed to know his part in this with frequent sightings and high-pitched cries. But the calm wasn’t forever.

Samuel sighed and turned away from the lake. “I wish they would have listened to me.”

In the last several weeks, Samuel had found dead deer, bears, and other animals’ bones by the lake. The mayor, council, and residents shrugged it off.

A rabbit, mirroring the other animal’s state, rested near the dock. Its life had drained away like a vampire had feasted. He shook his head as the crickets and frogs’ songs serenaded him. He climbed into his red pickup and turned on the radio.

“There’s been another sighting of a Willie creature in Oregon. This is the sixth one in the last week. All in natural lakes with no dams. Authorities are warning people to stay off natural lakes in the western states until they can investigate. Experts are suggesting they be mutated reptiles that had been pets at one point. Their hatching could be due to many factors but be assured they mean no harm if you don’t go into their territory. There is no reason to panic.”

Samuel shut the radio off. “Yeah, right. That’s no one’s pet. Maybe these experts should look one in the eye. They’d see they aren’t just lizards. We are under attack and people want to take pictures and buy tee-shirts.”

He signed out and left his resignation for the Mayor. Soon he was home. The rental with four bedrooms and a lake view deck had seemed to be too good to be true.

He walked through the door and pushed past the packed bags and boxes.

“You got everything, Selina?”

“Yes. All the things we came here with. Are you sure we should go? I mean, we are set back from the lake.”

“Something is coming. I can feel it. You’ve seen the intelligence in Willie’s gaze. It has been leaving the lake, and it’s only a matter of time before we are on its menu. I’ve found the perfect place, I promise. You’ll see. It has a well, a small creek, and no lakes or big bodies of water anywhere near it. Plus, it has a bunker. The man I bought it from was prepared for anything, including war.”

“You think we are going to war with those things, don’t you?”

“I do. I’ve been watching for years. I can feel the shift. I know it sounds crazy but…”

“No buts…I know you aren’t crazy Samuel, but I worry about money.”

“We’d be fine on our savings for a couple of years, but at the beginning of my shift, I got an offer to work security at a warehouse only a half hour from the house.”

“That’s good news. As long as we are together, I don’t care where we live.” Selina said added. “The girls are asleep. They think we are going on vacation.”

“Good, I’ll explain it to them later. We’ll leave first thing in the morning.”

“Let’s get some sleep.”

“After I pack the pick-up.”

Selina nodded and headed upstairs.

The next morning, they were three hours away from the lake and pulling into the driveway of their new concrete steel-fortified cabin. Selina and the girls jumped out of the car to explore. Relief flooded over him and he took the first deep breath in days.

Two weeks later, he was driving home with a truckload of supplies for their bunker when his favorite song was interrupted. “The State of California has issued a warning to those who live near the lakes where the Willie creatures have been spotted. Please leave the area immediately. I repeat evacuate now. Go to your nearest city. There have been several reported attacks outside of the lakes this morning. The National Guard has been called in. Please…”

Samuel turned off the radio. “It has begun.”

He sighed and climbed out of the truck, determined to keep his family safe.

The next Creative Perspective Challenge coming June 10th.

#CreativePerspectiveChallenge Five! #writingcommunity #flashfiction #poetry

Welcome to the fifth Creative Perspective Challenge. Here’s the link if you would like more information: RULES

I hope you join in with a poem or flash fiction for this image:

moonlight by vernonwiley from Getty Images Signature

I can’t wait to see the creativity! I will post links to those who participate and my own take on it.

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May Book Reviews! #BFRandall #ElizabethGauffreau #RobbieCheadle #jacquimurray #stacitroilo #TeaganRiordainGeneviene #sarahpenner #writingcommunity #bookreviews #whattoread

Welcome to my May book reviews! These are four and five-star reads from April.

Three Gates to Hell: Hell’s Detours Can Lead to Heavenly Destinations

By B. F. Randall

“Three Gates to Hell” was a hard book to put down. It is a Christian suspense story set in the Bay Area, which caught my attention as I was born and raised there. Bobby is a prison chaplain in San Quentin who has received a request that he didn’t like. The story flashes back in his time in Vietnam to his career in the Oakland Police Department, and his family life. The little details made it feel like it was a real story being told, not fiction. Bobby is a devoted family man and a hardened cop with a heart. The gritty story weaves his progression to faith, creating a character I rooted for. A well-written faith-based novel I can highly recommend!

Poetry Treasures 5: Small Pleasures

By DL MullanBarbara Harris LeonhardJude Kirya ItakaliIvor StevenRobbie CheadleMichelle Ayon NavajasGwen M. PlanoElizabeth GauffreauDavid BogomolnyDawn PasturinoMaggie WatsonColleen M. Chesebro

I have enjoyed the Poetry Treasures collections and was eager to read this one. As always, I found a gifted group of international poets. I appreciate how it is set up with the author’s background and then the poetry. There’s symbolic and free-verse poetry with various topics and beautiful images to accompany them. I encountered both familiar and new poets, and each one of them pulled me with their words. A perfect book for a quiet afternoon or to wind down before you go to sleep. I can highly recommend this to any poetry lovers.

Burning Butterflies: Poetry About Southern African Flora and Fauna

By Robbie Cheadle

This book, “Burning Butterflies”, offers insight into Southern Africa with stunning art, photos, and poetry. The paintings are stunning, and the personal pictures allowed me to immerse myself in a place I’ve never been. The words, though, not only entertained but educated me about animals I’ve only seen in the zoo. Plus, Ms. Cheadle followed up poems with additional details which I appreciated. I don’t want to pick a favorite poem because I felt like they worked together to tell a story. Worry is expressed for survival for some and how others survive. Plus, there’s a focus on the environment and what grows and blooms there. I can highly recommend this fantastic collection for those who not only care about our planet but love poetry, art, and nature.

Badlands (Savage Land #2)

By Jacqui Murray

The story continues as the different groups escape the volcano’s devastation. Yu’ung leaves her tribe in the hands of B’o as she accompanies the Old One to the mountain clan along with their proto-wolf. This allows the story to be told through more than one point of view and tribes as Yu’ung runs into issues that set them back. Despite the destruction of their environment, there persists a lack of trust among different tribes and species, but it also creates an opportunity for individuals who typically wouldn’t cooperate to do so. Having read the other series and the first book, I was eager to see what happened next. This story didn’t disappoint and had some twists and heart-stopping moments. The growth of Yu’ung into a strong leader is great to watch, and I have a soft spot for the wolves. Character integration feels seamless, yet identifying trustworthy individuals remains difficult. The details though are what draw me in and I feel like I understand as best I can the life our ancestors led. I can’t wait for the third book to see how the journey goes. I can highly recommend this, and it can be read as a standalone, but I’ve enjoyed reading it from the beginning and getting to know the characters better.

Weeping Boughs Don’t Break

By Staci Troilo

“Weeping Boughs Don’t Break” is a family drama that focuses on a woman’s journey to independence, despite everything seeming against her. Claudia’s unexpected divorce is five years behind her. After suffering years of mental abuse and her husband’s cheating, she still lives in the house that carries all those memories, and all the debt. When her now-married ex-husband collapses, she gets a call from her children. They need her. So, as a good mother and a person who puts everyone in front of her, she goes to support them. But instead of giving that support, she finds out she’s responsible for making medical decisions for her ex. His current wife leaves unwilling to care for a sick man. Although Claudia reluctantly agrees to help because of her in-laws and kids, it takes a toll on her and reopens old wounds. The details of her Italian family and their faith added a special level to an already compelling situation. Plus, during all of this, she meets a kind, handsome man who befriends her, just when she needed it. A well-written Christian drama that I found hard to put down and can easily recommend!

The Conjurer’s Wife

By Sarah Penner

A young woman named Olivia is the wife of a famous magician in 1820s Venice. Suffering from amnesia after an accident, she helps her husband on stage, although she has no idea how he does his tricks. The husband appears to use her as a prop, but she is slowly rebelling. When one of their acts produces a fox, she immediately takes charge of it. Her care for the little fox leads her to search places she hasn’t been before. It’s here she discovers a secret. My theories regarding her fate were almost correct, but the truth still surprised me. A short story with an engaging historical setting and fantasy for those who like a bit of mystery, and a twist.

The Alchemist and the Woman in Trousers: a Cornelis Drebbel Adventure

By Teagan Ríordáin Geneviene

“The Alchemist and the Woman in Trousers” was my introduction to Ms. Geneviene a few years ago on her blog, part of a weekly series. So, it was fun to revisit the story and read it in a couple of sittings. Felicity is a Victorian woman who refuses to wear the painful corsets with her gowns, but is more comfortable in her trousers. She travels with an alchemist, Cornelius, who isn’t exactly alive. Felicity comes across a young girl, Copper, who needs their help as an orphanage is coming to collect her, with her father missing. Plus, it isn’t only the orphanage that’s interested, including some unusual chimpanzees. Because of the circumstances, Felicity and Cornelius are left with only one option: keep Copper safe. Their search for Copper’s father drives the plot, featuring harmonic tuners, a purple world, villains, and an unusual green fairy. Steampunk and fantasy elements spring to life through vivid settings. An imaginative story that not only kept me entertained but also invested me in Copper, Felicity, and Cornelius’s outcome. I can easily recommend it to those who love an enjoyable steampunk fantasy.

Next week is the Creative Perspective Challenge, which is a week late due to my vacation. Will update soon on that!

Embrace your inner child by reading and reviewing a good book! D. L. Finn (Denise)