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Hooray! Tomorrow is the release day for The Destination. I am also sharing some fun pictures since tomorrow is Halloween.
Since I don’t have a review for myself I’ll pick the first one posted on Goodreads.
Blurb
The Harbor Pointe Inn has loomed on Californiaโs cliffs for generations of Hawthornes. For some, itโs been a blessing. For others, a curse. Travel through two centuries of stories to discover the old innโs secrets.
Itโs 1967, and best friends Lacey and Sandy are enjoying a beach vacation, completely unaware of the danger that is lying in wait outside their door. Their room is quaint, with an amazing view of the Pacific Ocean and an old lighthouse, but a killer is stalking their next victim. Powerless, Annie the ghost watches, knowing thereโs nothing she can do to helpโnot even her parents, the innkeepers. Who will survive their stay at the Harbor Pointe Inn, where the edge of evil lurks within the shadows?
Review by Staci Troilo





Yay! Tomorrow is the release day for the second book of the Harbor Pointe Series. If you haven’t picked up your copy there is still time. I am sharing the blurb and my review here today.

The Gift: Harbor Pointe Series Book 2
By Gwen M. Plano
BLURB
The Harbor Pointe Inn has loomed on Californiaโs cliffs for generations of Hawthornes. For some, itโs been a blessing. For others, a curse. Travel through two centuries of stories to discover the old innโs secrets.
In an innocent 1958 American suburb, Shelly doesnโt know the power of a kiss. Or how it will change her entire life.
At sixteen years old, she falls in love with a young man. One nightโjust one nightโthey go too far. Months later, pregnant and shamed, Shellyโs parents banish her.
Alone and heavily pregnant, circumstances force Shelly to cross the country in an old pickup.
A mistaken turn leaves her lost in a forest amidst a severe snow storm and in labor.
In the dark of night. Shelly must get help for her new-born baby before they both perish. A light in the distance gives her the slimmest glimmer of hope.
After Shelly wraps the infant in her fatherโs old jacket, she trudges through the snow to a lighthouse keeperโs cottage. Snow half buries the squat stone building.
Will Shelly find shelter, or is it the beginning of the end?
MY REVIEW
โThe Giftโ is set in 1958 when the one mistake of a sixteen-year-old girl makes her family not only turn their back on her but send her away. Shelly is very pregnant and scared to drive alone across the United States to stay with a relative until she has the baby. Almost at her destination, she runs out of gas in a snowstorm. She goes into labor and is forced to deliver her baby. If they stay in the old truck, they will perish, so she bundles up the baby and tries to find help. She sees a light that she hopes means help and heads towards it. I was ashamed of Shellyโs parents for sending her off like they did with an old unreliable vehicle and limited funds. Shelly was strong, though, when she needed to be. And the father who was away at college with no idea of her condition came back home and began his search for her. Itโs a beautifully told drama full of guilt, loss, regretโand love. I was completely invested in Shelly, the baby, and their survival. A cruel set of events for a teen also offered hope, which made this an inspirational read that I can highly recommend!

AUTHOR BIO
Gwen M. Plano, aka Gwendolyn M. Plano, grew up in Southern California and spent most of her professional life in higher education. She taught and served as an administrator in colleges in Japan, New York, Connecticut, and California. Gwen’s academic background is in theology and counseling. Recently retired, she now lives in the high desert of Arizona, where she writes, gardens, and travels with her husband.
Gwenโs first book is an acclaimed memoir, Letting Go into Perfect Love. Her second book, The Contract between heaven and earth, is a thriller fiction novel, co-authored by John W. Howell. It has received multiple awards and is an Amazon Best Seller. The Choice, the unexpected heroes is the sequel to The Contract. It is also a thriller, involving the attempt of an unfriendly nation to take over the world. The third book in the series, The Culmination, a new beginning is an action-packed military thriller that spans the globe and involves multiple Heads of State and the threat of World War III. Only love can change the fate of humanity.
When Gwen is not writing, she’s often in the beautiful Red Rocks of Sedona, where she finds inspiration.
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Hooray! The Harbor Pointe Series kicks off tomorrow with The Price of Atonement by Mae Clair!
If you haven’t picked up your copy yet, there’s still time to get it before it releases. You aren’t going to want to miss this story. My review follows the blurb.
BLURB
The Harbor Pointe Inn has loomed on California’s cliffs for generations of Hawthornes. For some, it’s been a blessing. For others, a curse. Travel through two centuries of stories to discover the old inn’s secrets.
Some hauntings come from within.
Leviticus Sinclair has been a broken man since the murders of his wife and brother. Burdened by personal failures the night they were killed, he occupies himself by crossing the country, searching out departed spirits unwilling to move from this world to the next. His dead brotherโs Bible and a pocket watchโforever frozen at the precise moment of his wifeโs deathโserve as grim reminders of a past he cannot exorcise.
Accompanied by Wyatt Resnick, a paid employee who fills the role of researcher and hired muscle, Leviticus arrives at the Harbor Pointe Inn amid rumors of a vengeful ghost. A phantom who may be the single spirit he has long sought, one capable of freeing him from his torment.
Set in the remote Pacific Northwest of 1887, The Price of Atonement is a story of jealousy, guilt, and one manโs relentless quest for absolution.
REVIEW
The Price of Atonement: Harbor Pointe Seriesย #1
By Mae Clair
โThe Price of Atonementโ kicks off the Harbor Pointe Series in the late 1800s. Leviticus has been traveling, seeking ghosts who wonโt cross over since his wife and brother were killed. Wyatt accompanies him as his assistant and caretaker. They end up at the Harbor Inn. Here, the Hawthorne family has some secrets, including an angry ghost, and a terrified young mother. With Wyattโs help, Leviticus tries to resolve their ghost issues while having to deal with his past. The setting was so beautifully described that it felt like I was another guest at the inn watching this unfold. The characterโs depth, guilt, and human flaws had me rooting for a successful outcome for everyone. Although the story is a novelette, it is fast-paced and rich with historical details, making it impossible to put this well-written story down. I would love to see more stories with Leviticus and Wyatt on their ghost adventures. I can highly recommend this story.

AUTHOR BIO
A member of the International Thriller Writers, Mae Clair is also a founding member and contributor to the award-winning writing blog, Story Empire. She has achieved bestseller status on both Amazon and Barnes & Noble, with several of her novels chosen as book club selections.
Mae writes primarily in the mystery/suspense genre, flavoring her plots with elements of urban legend and folklore. Married to her high school sweetheart, she lives in Pennsylvania and is passionate about cryptozoology, old photographs, a good Maine lobster tail, and cats.
Discover more about Mae on her website and blog at MaeClair.com

In mere three week’s Gwen Plano’s The Gift will follow. I will be posting my review. My story, The Destination, follows on Halloween with five more amazing stories to still enjoy. I will keep you posted.
Embrace your inner child by reading a great book. D. L. Finn
Hi!
After this post, I will be focused on my upcoming poetry book release. Instead of a big blog tour like for In the Tree’s Shadow I will be doing posts here. But before I get started, I wanted to share an excerpt from my novelette in the Harbor Pointe Series.
I will be talking about this series more, as the release dates get closer! Can’t wait ๐
Blurb
The Harbor Pointe Inn has loomed on Californiaโs cliffs for generations of Hawthornes. For some, itโs been a blessing. For others, a curse. Travel through two centuries of stories to discover the old innโs secrets.
Itโs 1967, and best friends Lacey and Sandy are enjoying a beach vacation, completely unaware of the danger that is lying in wait outside their door. Their room is quaint, with an amazing view of the Pacific Ocean and an old lighthouse, but a killer is stalking their next victim. Powerless, Annie the ghost watches, knowing thereโs nothing she can do to helpโnot even her parents, the innkeepers. Who will survive their stay at the Harbor Pointe Inn, where the edge of evil lurks within the shadows?
Excerpt
1967, Northern California
Annie watched helplessly as evil exited the beautiful redwood forest in predator mode. It prowled over to the precipice by the old lighthouse. Her deepest desire was to protect her parents. She had stayed by their side since dying in the wooden cradle her father had made, patiently waiting until they could hold her again. They deserved a happy life until then, but now a cruel person with an empty heart was near them, threatening them. Yet what could she do, a spirit?
The only time sheโd been able to assist the living was nine years ago when that poor girl Shelly had been lost and out of gas and given birth alone to sweet little Luke. Annie had guided Shelly through a snowstorm to her own parents, but she couldnโt lead this evil away from them. And what about the others at the innโwho would be the prey?
She sighed and wiped away a tear, knowing the killer would never feel this sorrow. What good was it for her to know things and not be able to do anything about them? It was a hard choice to stay and wait. The worst part was that her sweet mother had booked a reservation yesterday. More guests were coming to Harbor Pointe Inn, and there was no way to stop them. No way at all. Someone was going to die unless the evil was defeated. Since no one knew it was there, how would that happen? Saddened, Annie glided back to the inn to be by her parents.
The solemn middle-aged man topped off the gas in Laceyโs new red โ67 Ford Mustang convertible. Fluid and tires were checked as Sandy handed Lacey her requested coffee and donuts.
โWhere you young ladies headed?โ
โNorth. Up the coast.โ Lacey placed the coffee in the small box she used to hold her coffee and change and revved the car with her usual gusto.
The man wiped his hands on an old greasy rag and frowned. โPretty drive, but a dangerous road. Take those corners easy.โ
Lacey winked at him and tore out of the gas station faster than she should have. Sandy clicked her seat belt snugly across her lap as the coffee sloshed through the top of the paper cups and drained into Laceyโs box, soaking the tossed coins. Sandy dabbed the spill with a napkin she found in the glove box. A mess never bothered Lacey, so Sandy didnโt bother to comment. They were like sisters but could never be roommates.
Lacey tapped her pink manicured fingernail against Sandyโs arm. โThis is going to be the best. Donโt you go falling asleep again and miss this view.โ
Sandy held back a sigh and blew on the hot coffee. โI hardly slept last night, worrying if Iโd forgotten something. I needed a little nap. Besides, there hasnโt been anything I havenโt seen before since we left Sacramento.โ
โYeah, but you donโt want to miss the redwoods and the coast. Grams took me to this inn when I was little. You will love the ocean viewโthereโs a genuine working lighthouse. Maybe youโll spot a whale to study.โ Lacey grinned.
โIโd love to see a whale breach or even a pod of dolphins. Maybe I could get a picture.โ Sandyโs stomach fluttered like a kaleidoscope of monarch butterflies in flight as Lacey passed a car. The feeling was a combination of the thought of seeing whales and Laceyโs adventurous driving.
Lacey slowed after passing and rolled her shoulders. โYou arenโt an accountant and dutiful housewife. You are a marine biologist.โ
Sandy looked down and tugged off her white boots. โMy family needs me to work for them. Itโs been planned andโโ
Lacey cut off Sandyโs weak protest, holding up a hand that should have been on the wheel. โYour family will survive without you. Pay attention to all this beautyโweโll be there in about two hours.โ
The coffee kept her awake as they sped through the turns the man had warned about. Sandyโs stockinged foot pumped an imaginary brake as her friend deftly navigated the winding road. Lacey was right about the view. It was incredibleโdark blue waves crashing against a jagged rock shoreline. There was nothing but road, ocean, redwoods, and open land for the next two hours. But no whales.
Lacey broke the admiring silence. โMy cousin used to have a house in Crescent City. He lost it because of his gambling, you know.โ She stuffed a donut in her mouth and shrugged. โGrams always said it was lucky he never married. He moved to Reno and lived in some nice ladyโs extra room until he died. So sad to waste living in such a beautiful spot because he threw his money away on gambling.โ
Sandy kept her eyes pinned on the ocean over the curvy highway. โIโve heard itโs an illness.โ
โOne they sure donโt have a cure for. I think itโs more like a compulsion, like killing. Although they may not kill anyone, they sure kill their lives.โ Lacey shook her head and then pointed. โLook, on those rocks! They remind me of dogs!โ
Sandy laughed. โProbably Steller sea lions. They can get up to 2,500 pounds and would be hard to walk.โ
โOnly you would know that fact.โ
โSeals are fascinating. Iโd love to live here and hang out with them.โ
Lacey pursed her freshly lipsticked pink lips and rolled her eyes. โYou should.โ
Sandyโs throat tightened as she pushed down the hidden simmering rebellion with the cold coffee. โI have my family and my boyfriend.โ
Lacey sighed dramatically. โYour boring boyfriend. Gregโs not your soul mate, and you know it.โ
Sandy ignored Laceyโs truth bullโs-eye and tried to remove the barbed arrow that dug deeper into her obligation-filled reality. โIโve known Greg since kindergarten. We get along, our families are friends, and we would have the same values for raising kids. It makes sense that I marry Greg.โ She focused all her attention on the expansive Pacific Ocean while stuffing the last powdered donut in her mouth.
Lacey flung her auburn hair over her shoulder and added a head shake. โThat would make sense if you were hiring an employee, but you arenโt. This concerns your heart, not job qualifications, duties, and balance sheets. Iโve known you for as long as youโve known Greg. You donโt have to marry me because weโve known each other a long time, do you?โ
Sandy grinned but didnโt respond. Lacey was right. These very thoughts had crossed her mind more than once or twice. However, she never dared to say them out loud. It would make it all too real. Sandy had told Greg sheโd consider his marriage proposal while she was away. The families were probably already planning an engagement party for them.
โNot gonna answer that? Well, what about you having to lie to your parents and Greg about where weโre going?โ
Sandy looked away. โThey would worry too much.โ
โWorry? They would have stopped you!โ
โWell, they care about me.โ
Lacey threw both hands up before gripping the red steering wheel again. โThey smother you! Iโm pretty sure they donโt know the real you like I do. Good thing they didnโt know you had some money stashed away, or they would have put it to work for you and not let you use it.โ
Sandy shrugged. Her friend spoke the uncomfortable truth. In comparison, Sandy had woven a fictional story about visiting Redding to clean up Laceyโs grandmotherโs house to sellโa house that was already sold. The only thing that wasnโt a lie was that they were headed north, but she honestly didnโt believe there was another choice. At twenty-one years old, sheโd always done the right thing, like earning her associateโs degree in accounting from the local junior college several months ahead of schedule. She needed to taste freedom, even if this was her last and only shot at it before she committed to Greg.
Lacey skillfully changed the subject. โI already paid for the room. So you got some money to do some more traveling.โ
โWhat? No, we agreed to split the room and gas.โ
โWeโll talk about it later, Sandy. Letโs have some fun, okay?โ
โSure, later,โ Sandy mumbled, knowing she had already lost the battle. Sheโd find another way to pay her friend back.
Lacey slowed down for a hairpin turn. A thick fog bank was creeping in from the sea.
โIs that it?โ Sandy pointed to a lighthouse blinking in the distance.
โIt sure is. Although we got a room with a view, I wish it had been on the third floor, like when I went with Grams. Plumbing issues. What can you do?โ Lacey patted Sandyโs hand as they pulled onto a road with several potholes, probably from recent storms. They forced her speed to a crawl to avoid bottoming out. โI wish youโd reconsider coming to Europe with me. Thereโs a whole big world out there. You can pay me back if you have to. Grams left me well taken care of, and she loved you like you were part of the family.โ
Sandy took a deep breath and let it out quietly. Laceyโs offer tempted her. It really did. โI appreciate your wanting to take me along, and youโre rightโIโd insist on paying my way. But you know I canโt leave my family. They depend on me. You can do it for both of us.โ
Lacey groaned and added a tongue click. โIโm going to change your mind. You are going to be the marine biologist youโve always wanted to be. Thereโs a program at Humboldt State College.โ
Sandy crossed her arms as they drove past the lighthouse. She wanted to be out there on the ocean exploring. Maybe on her honeymoon, if there was one. โLike I can afford that degree.โ
โIโd offer to pay for it, but I know you would refuse. You could work your way through. Donโt let anyone tell you any different. My great-grandparents used to live there, and youโd be fine. Maybe youโd find your real Prince Charming.โ
Sandy shook her head, slipped the white boots back on, and responded with more regret than she should have felt. โI already have a life planned.โ
โNot the right one. Iโm going to do what I want, and so are you. The end.โ
Sandy studied the scenery and ignored Lacey. Her friend wasnโt going to win over her family. Or was she? Sandy felt a weight lift off her momentarily, but it came crashing back. They depended on her.
They pulled into a quaint, circular cobblestone driveway in front of a weathered inn. Off to the side was a redwood forest to explore, but the lighthouse caught her attention. She hoped they let the public inside. Next to it was a charming stone cottage. She could imagine living in that little house and working in the lighthouse. However, those days were goneโlighthouses were automated now. Lacey was right about her life, but was she brave enough to change her course? Did family responsibility mean more than what she wanted? Maybe she had some important reflecting to do.
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